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Psychologists have known for many years that colour can affect how people feel. For this reason, attention should be given to colour schemes when decorating places such as offices and hospitals. How true is this statement? How far does colour influence people's health and capacity for work?

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 have psychological effects and are used for most of the things we use in daily life.
This
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color
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 is very simple visual information that even small children can understand. Basically,
the
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color
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 influences people’s
feeling
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feelings
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 and health which is related to emotions. The
colors
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 can be classified
in
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 clam
colors
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 and intense
colors
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.
The calm
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colors
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such
 as white and green can make people relax.
On the other hand
, intense
colors
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such
 as black and yellow
give
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 people
feeling
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 anxious.
This
 specific
color’s
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 impression is used in
design
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.
For example
, Hospital walls and equipment are composed of calm
colors
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: reducing
stress
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the stress
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 of patients and
to prevent
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 patients who are mentally unstable. Especially, in
mental
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a mental
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clinic
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clinics
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 and children's hospitals, the
colors
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 which are used have been chosen with almost care for patients.
In addition
, the
colors
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 have influenced workers’ performances in the office. As opposed to the
color
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 which stimulates the human’s view, there are some
colors
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 and
color
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 combinations which do not distract workers. Those kinds of things about
colors
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 which are used in offices are
also
 effective on students’ concentration in the classroom. In my experience, there is wooden furniture with calm
colors
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 and white walls. The
colors
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 are very helpful to students to concentrate studying
,
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 because those
color
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 combinations which are contained by walls and furniture do not distract us. In summary, the psychological
color
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 effect is known as a useful and effective method in design.
Also
, they are used frequently in real life.
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