The pie charts show the main reason for migration to and from the UK in 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The pie charts depict the primary cause of migration to and from the UK in 2007.
Overall
, it is noticeable that the reason
for immigration in the definite job had the highest proportion of people , while
for no reason
lowest. Furthermore
, the reason
for emigration had the biggest percentage
of the public who are at the definite job, whereas
the formal study smallest.
To begin
with ,definite jobs in immigration, accounted for 30 % which is twice as much as accompanying and joining (15%). The figure for looking for work had roughly similar proportions to others, namely
12% and 11% respectively. The formal study was over 4 times bigger than people with no reason
.
However
, it was the most unpopular reason
over the period in question.
With regards to emigration, in terms of looking for work, it accounted for 22 % , whereas
accompany and join only 13 %. The figure for formal study was over three times smaller than others. However
,
the rate of definite jobs was approximately 29 % which is higher than no reason
stated ( 18 %).Submitted by dimash171206 on
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