The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features , and make comparisons where relevant.

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The presented diagram depicts the changes which took place in the floor plan of a mutual library 20 years ago and in the present. As is observed, all segments of the library have dramatically changed

since

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from

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20 years ago until now, only with the exception of the entrance. To commence with the western part of the map, CDs,videos and computer games have

completely

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been completely

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removed and replaced by storytelling events,two sizable sofas and children's fiction

books

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moreover

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, adult fantasy

books

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have been displaced by all reference ones. Not only the

books

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but

also

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the reading room given its place to the computers. The most remarkable

alter

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alteration

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happens to the middle part ,which includes the tables and chairs ,

that

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which

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was abolished after 20 years.

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, in the eastern part both children,

adult

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and adult

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non-fiction

books

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were changed by the lecture room and adult fiction booklet respectively.Not only

they

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did they

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change but

also

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an information desk with self-service machines was added next to booklets. In a similar fashion, the enquiry desk was replaced by

Cafe

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a Cafe

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.The only chunk that didn't change at all was the entrance.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words books with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "presented" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 5 times.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

1 paragraphs

179 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

floor plan
public library
layout
reading area
computer station
multimedia section
children's area
reference section
study cubicles
shelving units
digital media
technological advancements
user behavior
accessibility
traffic flow
modernization
community needs
conversion
allocation
removal

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The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features , and make comparisons where relevant.

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