You are watching television and saw a program being shown early in the morning that contained a lot of violence. You believe the program is unsuitable for that time of day. Write a letter to the manager of the television station. In your letter :- Give reason for writing. Explain what you think the problem is with the program. Say what you would like the station manager to do.

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Dear sir/madam I am writing
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letter to request the manager of the T.V. station to change the hour of the program named "Crime petrol" which starts early morning at 7 am because of their violent stories.
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with, I am writing on behalf of my society members as I am a secretary of the society. After discussing the matter, we tried to contact you about the serial which comes every morning.
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,
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is the stage to start our day with some positivity
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of violation.
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,
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is the best time to do some prayer
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starting a day.
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,
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is the point for children to entertain themselves by watching some good shows.
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,
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is a humble request from all of our society members to reschedule the timing of
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show. We would like to give you some advice on the basis of the community that it should be something that helps us to feel calm like meditation programs and has a positive impact ,especially on children as they are learning by watching things. I look forward to hearing from you. Thanks in advance. Yours faithfully Gurpinder Kaur
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