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Some people think that higher institutions should concentration more on academic subjects such as history and the physical sciences, while others think that they should concentrate more on practical subjects such as car mechanics and cookery, and so on. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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It is highly debated whether higher
institution
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 should concentrate more on
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academic
subjects
 like history and
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physical science or practical
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 like mechanics and cookery. I personally believe both are equally important to avoid gaps in
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society. The people who argue that
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academic
subjects
 should be
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concentrated
 more than practical
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 believe that there is a lot of knowledge in
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acadamic
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academic
subjects
 which
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 still to be
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flourished
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used
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 the real world.
For example
, History has great construction, which current
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 have no idea on how they were built, like the Great Pyramids of Egypt. Concentrating more on the history
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 university education helps to explore more and may bring out the facts and knowledge that our present world is missing.
On the other hand
, practical
subjects
 are
also
 equally important, as they make our day-to-day
life
 easier to function
such
 as mechanics, cooking, plumbing and construction. These streams play
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 role in everyday
life
 and those have to be concentrated for our
life
 to run smoothly.
For instance
, House, food and travel are the essentials of a human being and it is of high importance that these things are to be taken care of. Teaching these practicals in higher education will
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 an individual lead
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their
life
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.
To sum up
, Though practical and
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academic
subjects
 have their differences at
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institutional
 level, I believe, it is important to
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maintain
 a balance in
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their
 coexistence and concentrate on both as they have
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 role
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 the survival and improvements of our current world.
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