The diagram below shows the production of olive oil. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The diagram illustrates the steps involved in the
oil
production. There are several stages of making oil
, from picking olives by the farmers to the distribution stage. Moreover
, 7 stages in the production of the product have been illustrated.
The first step is
that the trees are grown by workers, and then
are peaked to the special rinsing maschine. After the rinsing stage, where plants are combined with the cold water, they are put on the belt and smashed. The end products, which are the olive paste as well as
olive stones, goes
to the bags with holes.
In order to make proper olive Change the verb form
go
oil
, these bags are pressed by special equipment. Having been left in this
separating machine, they are consequently
filtered from the water. In the end, oil
is packed in jars for distribution and selling. The finished product is delivered to the storage and sold to the markets and other companies, which is the last
stage of production.Submitted by aida.ai2000 on
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