The line graph below shows the average monthly temperatures in three major cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart reveals the average temperatures in a year of three main cities from three different regions:
Paris
in Europe, Dubai
in the Middle East, and Sydney
in Australia.
Overall
, it is obvious that the temperatures in Paris
and Sydney
are in contrast
; they are from two opposite hemispheres, while
the trend of those in Dubai
is similar to those in Paris
but much higher, especially in August.
The average temperature in Paris
rises gradually from 5 in January to 20 degrees in July and stays stable for a month before dropping down to the same level at 5 Celcius in December. This
resembles Dubai
but the hottest month is August when the warmth can reach 35 Celsius
in spite of the cooler weather in January, accounting for 20 Celsius
. However
, the weather tends to cool down to 25 in November and again at 20 Celcius in December.
Interestingly, in Sydney
, Australia, the temperature does not correspond to that in Paris
. in January, the temperature starts at 25 Celsius
and comes down to the lowest level of 15 Celsius
in July before rising consistently to nearly 25 Celsius
in December.
In conclusion, the climate of Paris
and Sydney
goes in the opposite direction, but the conditions in Dubai
tend to stay warm and could be hot throughout the year.Submitted by dondollaraus on
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