The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided information expresses the volume of opened and closed
shops
from the Use synonyms
year
2011 to 2018 in one country.
Use synonyms
Overall
, the figure for closing stores grew more than for opening stores. Linking Words
However
, digit of closing stores fell and rose again.
At the beginning, Linking Words
the
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of the
year
2011, Use synonyms
volume
of closed Add an article
the volume
shops
was near about 64000. The trend was upward till 2013. After that, the number steep drop down to its lowest level, which was in the Use synonyms
year
2015. Only almost 500 Use synonyms
shops
were closed at that time. Use synonyms
However
, the volume of closed Linking Words
shops
rose again and reached nearly 5100 numbers in the Use synonyms
year
2018.
Regarding the digit of the opening Use synonyms
shops
were higher than closing Use synonyms
shops
. In the Use synonyms
year
2011, 8500 Use synonyms
shops
were opened. Use synonyms
Whereas
, almost at the same time the opened Linking Words
shops
fell but in a greater number than closed Use synonyms
shops
. Use synonyms
Then
again, it grew at the same time as closed Linking Words
shops
in the Use synonyms
year
2014 at the same level which was nearly 6000 . After that, the trend was downwardUse synonyms
,
and stopped at its lowest point in the Remove the comma
apply
year
2011.Use synonyms
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