The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided information expresses the volume of opened and closed
shops
from the
year
2011 to 2018 in one country.
Overall
, the figure for closing stores grew more than for opening stores.
However
, digit of closing stores fell and rose again. At the beginning,
the
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year
2011,
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of closed
shops
was near about 64000. The trend was upward till 2013. After that, the number steep drop down to its lowest level, which was in the
year
2015. Only almost 500
shops
were closed at that time.
However
, the volume of closed
shops
rose again and reached nearly 5100 numbers in the
year
2018. Regarding the digit of the opening
shops
were higher than closing
shops
. In the
year
2011, 8500
shops
were opened.
Whereas
, almost at the same time the opened
shops
fell but in a greater number than closed
shops
.
Then
again, it grew at the same time as closed
shops
in the
year
2014 at the same level which was nearly 6000 . After that, the trend was downward
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and stopped at its lowest point in the
year
2011.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words shops, year with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • retail landscape
  • net growth
  • market dynamics
  • economic indicators
  • fluctuations
  • pivotal
  • consumption patterns
  • e-commerce
  • brick-and-mortar
  • downward/upward trend
  • stabilize
  • recession
  • boom
  • retail sector
  • closure rate
  • inauguration/opening rate
  • consumer market
  • saturate
  • commercial viability
  • profitability
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