You recently encountered some problems with a public transportation service in your area. Write a letter to the manager of the public transport company and say - where and what the problems were - explain how these problems affect the public - suggest what changes could be made to improve the situation

Dear Sir/Madam I am writing a letter to inform some issues that we encountered in using public transportation within our area at Naracoorte company.
This
problem we face
it
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now in our community at Teyes Brothers. The workers
they
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may be able not to go and work
due to
the broken
transport
,
however
; we
try
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to
warm
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the driver to report the issues
of
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the public
transport
yet he never did report the problem.
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to
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we
do
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face a lot of things that
affecting
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our
job
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and school
especially
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for
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our children. One main
issues
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now that the public
we
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encountered
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is not
to go and
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shopping for our food and
that is
the main need
to
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our family. I am suggesting if the council buy a spare public
transport
for the community and if
this
case
occur
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again
then
there is no more problem for the people in the area because they know that there will be
a
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transport
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transport
. I appreciate your time and let me know if you have any more questions regarding
these issue
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. Yours' Faithfully, Tokateti Totoki
Submitted by riemwatokateti on

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task response
Ensure that the letter addresses all the key points mentioned in the prompt, and provide specific details about the problems faced with public transportation.
coherence and cohesion
The greeting and closing need to be more formal and suitable for a business letter. Avoid using generic openings and closings like 'Dear Sir/Madam' and 'Yours Faithfully.'
lexical resource
Improve the range and accuracy of vocabulary used. Use specific and appropriate terms related to public transportation and problem-solving.
grammatical range
Work on sentence structure, punctuation, and grammar to convey ideas clearly and accurately. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and sentence construction.

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