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Some people think that it is better for high school students to study a wide range of subjects than to focus on a narrow range of subjects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#people #school #students #study #range #subjects #focus
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It is always argued
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whether high school
students
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 should take a versatile program
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one
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 major. In my opinion, learning various
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 is absolutely better than
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 specific
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 and cons. There are many benefits that studying a huge scope of
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. First of all, many high school
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 found where their passion is. In
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 way, if you force them to focus on
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subject
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 of keep discovering their talent, some of them are going to
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 their career direction or even have no interest
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 studying.
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, it is of paramount importance to have
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knowledge of different
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, which will make them more flexible and successful in their career. On the other side, there
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 some disadvantages
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 that way. the most crucial flaw is
students
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 study well given that there are excessive
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 need to study, In that way, they don'
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 have enough time to do all of them well.
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, the huge amount of
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 will make they don'
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 have sufficient time to have some outdoor activities, which is as essential as studying. another defect is for
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set up their
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 to
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, learning a lot of
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 is unnecessary for them.
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 there are still a few faults
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 studying more
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, I strongly believe it is better than
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 on
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due to
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 it can provide versatile
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 field for all
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • well-rounded
  • interdisciplinary
  • curriculum
  • specialization
  • mastery
  • core curriculum
  • elective options
  • educational systems
  • extracurricular activities
  • job market trends
  • skill set
  • academic rigor
  • vocational skills
  • cognitive flexibility
  • career trajectory
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