The line graph below shows the population size, birth and death rate of England and Wales from 1700 to 2000. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The supplied data table describes the
population
size, birth
and death
rates
on
England and Wales from 1700 to 2000. As a general trend, the Change preposition
in
population
size rate
increased overwhelmingly after the 19th century in England and Wales. Moreover
, the death
rates
declined after 1800Fix the agreement mistake
rate
started
, Verb problem
apply
while
the birth
rate
after 1950 went upward.
It could be noticed that the population
size of England and Wales started at approximately 3 million
in 1700, then
after 50 years the population
rate
went as high as 10 million
. During the next 50 years
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,years
population
rate
declined to nearly 3 million
in 1800. Again after 50 years, it increased from nearly 3 million
up to 10 million
in 1850. Furthermore
, that year, the rate
rapidly increased to almost 45 million
people
in 1900. However
, in the following centuries
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,centuries
rate
reached 50 million
in 2000.
The birth
rate
and death
followed the
similar trend from 1700 to 1950. Correct article usage
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In
1700 to 1750, an Change preposition
From
increased
was seen in both of these Replace the word
increase
rates
. The birth
was rose from 30 to 40 per 1000
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1,000
people
while
the death
rate
increased from around 27 to almost 37 per 1000
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1,000
people
. From 1750 to 1800 the rate
mode was steady for both the
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birth
and death
reaching an all-time low of round
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around
people
by 1950. From that year, the sharp increase in the birth
rate
begins
climbing to roughly 34 per 1000 folks in 2000. Wrong verb form
began
In contrast
, the death
rates
plateaued from 1950 to 2000.
Overall
, population
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the population
rate
increased as a result
of skyrocketing
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the skyrocketing
birth
rate
and stabilized death
rate
. In 2000 the birth
rate
in the UK was as high as 34, while
the death
rate
was 20.Submitted by hamoudisayyah on
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