The line graph below shows the population size, birth and death rate of England and Wales from 1700 to 2000. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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rates
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on
England and Wales from 1700 to 2000. As a general trend, the Change preposition
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population
size Use synonyms
rate
increased overwhelmingly after the 19th century in England and Wales. Use synonyms
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death
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rate
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while
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birth
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rate
after 1950 went upward.
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size of England and Wales started at approximately 3 Use synonyms
million
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then
after 50 years the Linking Words
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rate
went as high as 10 Use synonyms
million
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population
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rate
declined to nearly 3 Use synonyms
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in 1800. Again after 50 years, it increased from nearly 3 Use synonyms
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in 1850. Use synonyms
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million
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in 1900. Use synonyms
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in 2000.
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1000
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while
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people
. From 1750 to 1800 the Use synonyms
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people
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birth
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rate
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begins
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rates
plateaued from 1950 to 2000.
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population
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the population
rate
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the skyrocketing
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death
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rate
. In 2000 the Use synonyms
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rate
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while
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death
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rate
was 20.Use synonyms
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