You have recently changed your job and started working for a new company. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter: •explain why you changed your previous job •describe your new job •tell him/her your other news

#job #company #friend #•explain #•describe #•tell #news

Dear Evans I hope you are well and happy with your family. I am doing well here. I would like to inform you about the recent activities that

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happened after you went back to the rural areas. I was offered a new position at Eilbeck in Australia. I was a lifting machinery inspector at Water Weights. The company was good but there was no chance of my bright career. Eilbeck is the biggest crane company in Australia and it is paying high rates with other benefits. At

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they are offering pension, medical aid, overtime, holiday, company vehicle, cellphone and bonuses. I am very happy to take the position of crane technician and focus on crane repairs. I work with many engineers and safety officers in the field. I am going through a lot of training at the

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offices. My biggest challenge is the new mobile plant which is running on automation. I would like to tell you more good news, which is the engagement celebration of Antony from the engineering department. Antony is getting married to the high school maths teacher who used to teach the lower level at Marange High School. I hope we will meet soon and do not forget to reply

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letter. Yours faithfully Elias

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

212 words

5.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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The Closing

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