Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for qualification. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Write at least 205 words.

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It is true that many Students going to university prefer learning extra
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with
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that they chose for getting a qualification others think that it is necessary to concentrate on
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the main
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and learning
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secondary
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is not needed.
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preparing
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the important
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for going to future work plays a big role, I believe that other
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can
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have benefits for individuals. There are some advantages
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studying a lot of
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with, learning only
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can become boring for students.
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as maths, physics, chemistry and other sciences with each
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start to be difficult for University students because there are a lot of aspects like analyzing the process,
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research which have
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a large impact
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people's
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, if extra
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are not necessary
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qualification, they can be useful in other daily routines. Some
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like art or
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will help individuals illuminate ,
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, the future house or build something.
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result
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a result
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,
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a person
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can achieve all his goals.
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, there are some negative sides of
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some
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. One of these is that students’ timetable gets to be activity -
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filled
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and they haven't got free
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for their hobbies and other things.
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, they will be tired.
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this
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, studying extra
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is not appropriate for people who cannot collect all
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knowledge
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in their
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. During the university exams, they can forget something important. because with their timetable
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for preparing
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for tests
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with less. So, sometimes studying secondary
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can be
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a waste
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of
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, adding extra lessons will
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good
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a good
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variant for
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some new
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knowledge
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, but ,
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. it can have
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effect
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the individual
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individual
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individuals
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