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The table below gives information on UK males’ and females’ average hours and minutes on different daily activities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information on UK males’ and females’ average hours and minutes on different daily activities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table compares the average of
time
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 spent on various activities for both genders in the UK.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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 all genders spend most of their
time
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 in sleep almost eight
hours
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 per day.
Men
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 do a plethora of activities in their leisure
time
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such
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 as sports, reading etc.... more than women ( 5.25 and 4.53
hours
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 respectively). Around 1.25
hours
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 and ,minutes British
men
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 are spending in eat and drink compared to only 1.19
hours
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 for British women. It is noticeable that females exhaust the same amount of
time
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 in resting and personal care about 0.48 regarding males who are exhausted (0.43 and 0.40
hours
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) in those activities. As can be seen, boys always have 3.45
hours
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 in employment and study
whereas
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 girls have just 2.26
hours
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. Women do their homework at 3.00
hours
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 every day
while
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men
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 do it at 1.41
hours
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 per day.
Nevertheless
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, the sum of
hours
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 that ladies spend on childcare is 0.32 and
men
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 exhaust about 0.15 times. British people spend the average of their
time
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 in voluntary work and meetings.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words time, hours, men with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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