You have seen an advertisement in the newspaper for a temporary job working as a Sales Representative during the holiday season. You decide to apply for the job. Write a letter to the Hiring Manager of the company. In your letter: Introduce yourself Explain what experience and special skills you have Explain why you are interested in the job Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Hiring Manager,

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Dear Hiring Manager, I am writing

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letter with regard to one of your advertisements I came across in the local newspaper for the vacancy of sales representative in the vacation period. I am Jennifer, Currently pursuing my under graduation at Sheridan College. At present, I am in my summer holidays for the next couple of months. I have recently shifted to Square One from New Whales

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I am currently looking for a job to do in my holidays. Previously

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I was residing at New Whales, I worked as a sales executive in Lara supermarket for six months since it was difficult to commutation with my college I shifted here. During my tenure there I have excelled in my sales target and

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majority of the customers rated 5 stars for the services and assistance provided

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, I have elected marketing as my specialization so I am interested in acquiring more skills and experience which would help me apply for my long-term job. I Look forward to hearing your positive feedback Yours Faithfully, Jennifer.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

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8 paragraphs

176 words

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