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The chart below shows the amount of lesiure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status.

The chart below shows the amount of lesiure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status.
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bar chart illustrates the amount of free
time
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 that both genders of various employment
categories
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 had between 1998 and 1999.
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, it is evident that
men
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 enjoyed more free
time
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 than
women
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 in three
categories
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.
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, the information about
women
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 is only shown in 2
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employed part-
time
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 and housewives. Starting with employed full-
time
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 males have more leisure
time
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 than
women
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 more than 40
hours
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 compared to around 38
hours
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 for
women
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. Unemployed and retired
men
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 and
women
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 enjoyed more leisure
time
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 than any other category and approximately have same percentage. The Retired
men
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 have approximately 80
hours
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 and
women
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 have less than 80
hours
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 respectively. The
hours
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 for unemployed
men
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 and
women
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 are
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 similar in the retired category. Housewives enjoyed 50
hours
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 of spare
time
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 more than those employed part-
time
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women
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 who have only around 40
hours
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. There is no data regarding
men
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 in these
categories
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words time, categories, men, women, hours with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "amount" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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