The chart below shows the amount of lesiure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status.
The
given
bar chart illustrates the amount of free Verb problem
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time
that both genders of various employment categories
had between 1998 and 1999.
Overall
, it is evident that men
enjoyed more free time
than women
in three categories
. However
, the information about women
is only shown in 2 categories
named
employed part-Verb problem
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time
and housewives.
Starting with employed full-time
males have more leisure time
than women
more than 40 hours
compared to around 38 hours
for women
. Unemployed and retired men
and women
enjoyed more leisure time
than any other category and approximately have same percentage. The Retired men
have approximately 80 hours
and women
have less than 80 hours
respectively. The hours
for unemployed men
and women
are also
similar in the retired category.
Housewives enjoyed 50 hours
of spare time
more than those employed part-time
women
who have only around 40 hours
. There is no data regarding men
in these categories
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