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The chart gives information on the percentage of women going into higher education in five countries for the years 1980 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart gives information on the percentage of women going into higher education in five countries for the years 1980 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given graph depicts information about the women percentage that went to five various country in between 1980 to 2015 for
education
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. At first glance, it is quite evident, that Australia is one of the countries where most females reached,
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 almost 58% in order to attain their higher
education
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 in 1980.
whereas
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, France comes in second number that accommodates 50% of female
students
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.
while
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 the UK and the USA accommodate almost 35% and 38% respectively. South Korea was the least popular among women in 1980, and only 14% of student girls went there to get their higher
education
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.
on the other hand
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, 2015 was popular as compared to 1980 among females where it is clearly seen that the percentage of female
students
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 in the UK and USA increased by 20%. In 2015 the number of
students
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 who visited Australia was the same as in 1980. A rise can be seen in South Korea as compared to 1980 and a slight rise of 3% in France is clearly visible in 2015.
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, 2015 was more popular among female
students
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 as compared to 1980 in order to study their higher
education
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