your english speaking frind who lives in your town has asked for your advice about leaning a new sport. write an email to you friend . in your email recommend a new sport thta would be suitable for you frind to lear explain how your friend could learn this sport suggest tht you both learn this sport together

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Dear Tom I am writing to recommend
you
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apply
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o
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apply
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the new sport that would you like
learn
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to learn
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I
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haveI
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been
in
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to
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australia
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Australia
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fot
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for
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last
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the last
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years
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few years
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I noticed that everyone
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loves
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love
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swim close to the beach the most popular and close to your area is Bondi Beach. I would like
high
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recommend
this
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activitiy
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activity
to you, definitely is a great
a
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apply
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idea in your journey of lear
spanish
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Spanish
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having
conversation
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conversations
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with people
of
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from
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differents
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different
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countries but
no
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not
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just only that you will
available
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to improve your skills
of
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in
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swimming and suscribe in the champeon of the next summer.
however
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I may
thinking
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too
been
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being
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in
this
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activity with you , will be fun, Please
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don't
dont
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hesitate
heasitate
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hesitate
is
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you have any
question
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monica
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