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The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Total School Spending 1981 Insurance 2% Total School Spending 1991 /Insurance 3% Other workers' salaries 28% Other workers' salaries 22% Teachers' salaries 40% Teachers' salaries 50% Resources e.g. books 20% Resources e.g. books 15% Furniture and equipment 15% Furniture and equipment 5% Total School Spending 2001 Other workers' salaries 15% Insurance 8% Resources e.g. books 9% Teachers' salaries 45% Furniture and equipment 23%

The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Total School Spending 1981 Insurance 2% Total School Spending 1991 /Insurance 3% Other workers' salaries 28% Other workers' salaries 22% Teachers' salaries 40% Teachers' salaries 50% Resources e.g. books 20% Resources e.g. books 15% Furniture and equipment 15% Furniture and equipment 5% Total School Spending 2001 Other workers' salaries 15% Insurance 8% Resources e.g. books 9% Teachers' salaries 45% Furniture and equipment 23%
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The three pie charts illustrate the principle that the total
amount
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 of funds spent by a certain UK school yearly in 1981, 1991 and 2001. There are five types of usages below, and teachers'
salaries
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 are the main ones.
Firstly
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, the three charts show the lowest
amount
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 was spent on
insurance
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 below 10%.
Also
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, over a quarter
amount
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 was used for teacher's
salaries
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 in 1981, 1991 and 2001.
Secondly
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, an equal percentage of funds was spent on resources and kinds of stuff at nearly 15% in 1981. In the same ,year approximately one-third of the
amount
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 was spent on other worker's
salaries
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 and the lowest
amount
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 was spent on
insurance
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 at 2%.
Moreover
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, half an
amount
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 was spent on teacher's
salaries
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 in 1991.
Therefore
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, the least
amount
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 was used for
insurance
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, furniture and equipment orderly at 3% and 5% in 1991. The
salaries
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 for teachers were over one-third annually in 2001.
Also
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, nearly 8 and 9 per cent of the money was used for
insurance
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 and resources in 2001.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words amount, salaries, insurance with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 7 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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