"The graph and table below show the average monthly rainfalls and average annual rainfalls for three towns in the district of Kona in Hawaii for a 30-year period (1971-2000). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant."
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The graph and table depict average monthly and annual
rainfall
trends over 30 years (1971-2000) in Hawaii's Kainalu
, Opihihale
, and Halualoa
.
All three areas saw declining rainfall
. Kainalu
consistently had the highest rainfall
, followed by Opihihale
and Halualoa
.
In Kainalu
, January started with over 10 cm
of rainfall
, decreasing to around 7 cm
. July and September witnessed a peak of 17 cm
, maintaining Kainalu
's lead.
Opihihale
and Halualoa
had variable rainfall
, ranging from under 6 cm
to just under 12 cm
.
Kainalu
averaged 138 cm
of annual rainfall
, while
Opihihale
had 110.48 cm
, and Halualoa
had 97.53 cm
.
In summary, these data illustrate declining rainfall
trends in Kainalu
, Opihihale
, and Halualoa
over 30 years. Kainalu
consistently led in both monthly and annual rainfall
, while
the other two areas experienced more variable patterns.Submitted by misstiasclassroom on
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