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Some people think it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others , however, believe that boys and girls would benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

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School
 play an essential role in
child's
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a child's
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 development. The topic
whether
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of whether
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boys
 and
girls
 should be taught in
seprate
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separate
schools
 or mixed
school
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schools
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 has been a significant debate for years. Some people think that it is best to educate
both
genders
 in single-sex
schools
while
 others argue that co-education will
benefical
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beneficial
 for them.
This
 essay will
further
 elaborate
both
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 perspectives before offering my opinion on
this
 matter.
To begin
 with, Single-sex
schools
plays
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play
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vital
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a vital
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 role in better performance.
In other words
, if children
educate
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educated
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 in separate
school
than
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then
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 it
reduce
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reduces
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the
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distraction and leads to better performance in academics.
Secondly
,
Students
 can focus more
in study
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on studying
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 rather than other activities
such
 as personal grooming and
impress
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impressing
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the
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other people. Not only
this
, pupils learn discipline
as well as
 they follow the rules.
Moreover
,
both
the
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genders
 can achieve their goals easily as there is no distraction and their only focus is academic performance.
On the other hand
, some advocates believe that educating
girls
 and
boys
 in
same
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the same
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school
 helps not only in academics but in real life too.
For instance
, if
boys
 and
girls
 be taught in
same
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the same
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schools
 they develop
better
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a better
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 understanding
for
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of
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 one another and it will eventually help them in real life
such
 as
marital
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in marital
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situation
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situations
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 and even in
buisness
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business
.
Furthermore
, Co-education
is
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also
help
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helps
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 in personal grooming as
students
 care
abot
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about
 their appearance.
In addition
,
both
the
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genders
 learn to respect each other and try to co-exist in
such
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an enviroment
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enviroment
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environment
environments
.
Due to
 educating in same
school
students
 become more confident
while
 communicating with
eachother
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each other
.
For example
,
recent
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a recent
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 study shows that
students
 who
studying
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study
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 in
mix
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mixed
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schools
 are more
comfertable
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comfortable
 with
opposite
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the opposite
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 gender
to communicate
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than
the
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apply
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student
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students
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 who
studying
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study
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 in single-sex
school
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schools
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.
To conclude
, There is
ongoing
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an ongoing
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 debate whether
boys
 and
girls
 should be taught in
same
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the same
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school
 or separate
school
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schools
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. some people argue that same
school
 help them to better understand opposite gender
while
 single-sex
school
 help them focus on study more without any disturbance. In my opinion,
co-eduaction
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co-education
 will
beneficial
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be beneficial
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 for
both
the
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apply
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genders
 as they can learn to co-exist and it
evntually
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eventually
help
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helps
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 them in real life too.
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