the chart below shows the value of one country export in various categories during 2015 and 2016. the table shows the percentage change in value of export in 2016
The bar graph below compares the worth of five different categories of a country's exports in
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the year
year
2015 and 2016. Fix the agreement mistake
years
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Also
there is a table illustrating the relative change in their values during Add a comma
,Also
this
period.
We can see that Linking Words
products
differentiated from oil and Use synonyms
goods
produced by engineers Use synonyms
has
brought the most money for the state. Change the verb form
have
Whereas
, agricultural Linking Words
products
and textiles were among the least profitable exports.
Looking at the bar chart, Use synonyms
goods
produced from petroleum were the only Use synonyms
goods
to value more than 60 billion dollars in 2015 Use synonyms
while
in 2016, they were able to make the same amount of money from their engineered creations too. Comparing both of these categories of Linking Words
products
, we notice that the engineering Use synonyms
products
' figures increased more than they did for petroleum Use synonyms
goods
, 8.5 and 3 per cent respectively.
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On the other hand
, Linking Words
outcomes
of Correct article usage
the outcomes
textile
industry grew the most with more than 15 per cent and in 2016, they almost matched the money made by agriculture, which stayed almost the same during Add an article
the textile
this
period of time. Linking Words
However
, the only category to see its revenues reduced was jewelleries which dropped by a little over 5 per cent in 2016.Linking Words
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