The graph below shows the changes in food consumption by Chinese people between 1985 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The
grapics
illustrates the changes in food Correct your spelling
graph
consumption
by Chinese people between 1985 and 2010, in grams
per person per week.
Observably, fish was the most consumed food throughout the period
, followed by meat
and salt
.Fish consumption
increased from 600 grams
in 1985 to 700 grams
in 1990, and then
remained relatively stable until 2005. In the last
five years of the period
, fish consumption
increased again to reach 850 grams
in 2010.Meat
consumption
also
increased steadily over the period
, from 100 grams
in 1985 to 200 grams
in 2010.Salt
consumption
, on the other hand
, decreased significantly over the period
, from 500 grams
in 1985 to 200 grams
in 2010.
The gap between meat
and salt
consumption
narrowed significantly over the period
. In 1985, salt
consumption
was five times higher than meat
consumption
. By 2010, salt
consumption
was only equal to meat
consumption
.
Overall
, the changes in food consumption
in China have been positive. Chinese people are now eating more nutritious foods and less salt
, which has led to an improvement in their health and life expectancy.Submitted by dnm.best on
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