The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2), emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal Between 1967 and 2007. Summarise the infomation by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparions where relevant.

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The provided graph describes the information on

average

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rate of

carbon

dioxide

(CO2) that

released

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by every

men

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and

women

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some countries of Europe from the year 1967 to 2008.

Overall

, the rates in the country like Italy, and Portugal were upward trend.

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Kingdom

and

Sweden

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percentage of

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carbon

dioxide

(CO2)

were

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downturn

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. In five

decaeds

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decades

, from 1967 to 2007, Italy and Portugal

discharge

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most of the

carbon

dioxide

(CO2). At the beginning, the rate was more than 4%. In the course of the time, that rate increased and reached near about 7.7% for Italy and for Portugal 5.7%.

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the United

Kingdom

and

Sweden

released

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carbon

dioxide

(CO2) than their starting time. The graphs were declined. In the United

Kingdom

males and females discharged close to 10.2%

carbon

dioxide

(CO2), and in

Sweden

8.2%

carbon

dioxide

(CO2) emissions

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per person in the year 1967. These percentages fell by .8% for the United

Kingdom

and approximately 3.5% for

Sweden

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