The graph shows the amount earned by graduates of different age groups in 2002. It includes those with a degree, those with higher degree (postgraduate) and those with other qualifications. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparisons where relevant. (150 Words)

The graph shows the amount earned by graduates of different age groups in 2002. It includes those with a degree, those with higher degree (postgraduate) and those with other qualifications. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparisons where relevant. (150 Words)
The graph displays the accumulation of weekly
earnings
of different
age
groups in 2002. The three different groups were people with a
degree
, a higher
degree
, and other qualifications. Generally, the more mature
age
people had the higher the weekly
earnings
they earned. Both the others and higher
degree
got their peak weekly
earnings
for the
age
36-40. The others had the lowest at the
age
21-25 for about 410 dollars and 305 dollars for the first
degree
group which doubled from the initial.
Then
both kept increasing until the
age
of 36-40 with around 800 dollars for the other and approximately 670 dough for the first
degree
. The higher
degree
,
on the other hand
, had its top at the
age
41-45,
then
slightly decreased for the older group, but surprisingly it peaked again at the
age
of 56-50.
This
group got the second place for the highest weekly
earnings
while
the others had the highest and the first
degree
had the lowest
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