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The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan. Japan’s population: past, present and future trends.

The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan. Japan’s population: past, present and future trends.
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The bar chart below compares the
population
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 of
Japan
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 from 1950 until today and
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 illustrates estimations of
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figure
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 until 2055.
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, the table
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gives
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 data about the same information with a focus on the
population
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 of
people
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 over 65 years old.
Overally
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, we can see that the figures for the
population
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 of
Japan
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is
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are
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 predicted to tremendously decline between 2015 and 2055.
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, we're witnessing the rise of
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the elderly's
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elderly's
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population
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. Looking at the bar chart,
Japan
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 had just over 84
million
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 citizens in 1950. It continued rising in
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figure
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the figure
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 until it peaked at almost 128
million
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 in 2005 where it started to decrease slowly.
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According to
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 the predictions,
Japan
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 will lose over 35
million
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 of its
population
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 between 2015 and 2055, almost 30
million
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 of which
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 to the second half of that period. Focusing on the table,
Japan
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 had a little under 5 per cent of its
population
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 in the ages above 65 years, with only 4.1
million
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 old
people
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. By the year
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2005,
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figure
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 had
rose
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 to 20 per cent of the
population
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 and over 25
million
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people
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 were
then
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, elderly.
This
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 trend is predicted to continue until 2035 and
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, 2055 when respectively, 34 and 41 per cent of its
population
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 are over 65 years.
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, we will see the
population
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 of elder
people
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 fall just by 0.7
million
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 between 2035 and 2055, even though in relative terms their
figure
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 will still grow.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, japan, figure, people, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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