The chart below shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of fruits and vegetables per day in the UK from 2001 to 2008. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The display chart
provide
the percentage of the public who ate five portions of fruits Change the verb form
provides
as well as
vegetable per day in the UK from 2001 to 2008.
In children, in 2001, 2002 and Linking Words
also
in 2003 it was more than 10, in 2004 and 2005 it Linking Words
was increase
by 17, in 2006 it was around 20, in 2007 it was between 25 to 30 and in 2008 it was 22. In men, in 2001, 2002 and 2003, there Change the verb form
was increased
was
around 12, in 2004 and 2005 it was 17, in 2006 it was 21, in 2007 it was 28 and in 2008 it was 27. In women, in 2001 it was 17, in 2002 it was 19, in 2003 it was 27, in 2004 it was 29, in 2006 it was the highest 35 and in 2007 it was 32 and in 2008 it was 30.
Correct subject-verb agreement
were
To conclude
, the above information describes about children, men and women eat fruit and Linking Words
vegatable
per day in the UK Correct your spelling
vegetables
vegetable
in
from 2001 to 2008.Change preposition
apply
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