Blood sports (any spots involving Killing or shedding of blood as bull fighting, cockfighting or hunting)have become hot topic for debate in recent years.as society develops it is increasingly seen as an uncivilized activity and cruel to the helpless animals that are killed.blood sports should be banned.TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE

Some people argue that blood sports should be illegal. I strongly agree with their opinion because it not only hurts innocent

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is against basic morality

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we have in our

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. Talking about poor

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get hurt a lot in

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of competitions without deserving it. After centuries of research, we now know that

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have emotional processing systems similar to us and

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, they feel pain just like we do and it is considered highly cruel and cold-hearted to make them go through

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misery just to entertain us.

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, some people use how we kill and eat them as an excuse. To negate their point,

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exactly why we have protocols before killing these farm

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as giving them water and making the process as fast as it gets.

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Islam we have a procedure called Zebh in which the animal is carefully killed in a sudden fashion, so it would feel less pain.

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, our

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taking hits from these

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activities.

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, promoting violence and blood-shed is the exact opposite direction of our civilization.

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of teaching our kids about caring and having good will,

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will stay in their

unconsious

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mind and might

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itself in

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of crime and hate.

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, even in our most brutal and violent

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we make sure to respect the

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and maintain a level of morality

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animals

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no

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mixed martial arts or MMA has been around for a

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two

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humans are put into a cage, they still have

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to follow and anyone who watches them fight is

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aware.

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, nobody is going to mistake our

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for a jungle where humans drink other people's blood.

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, I believe it is completely insane and immoral to allow blood sports to continue their activities and we should

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all means, forbid them to stop

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from being abused and prevent the violence it is injecting

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the veins of our

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