Blood sports (any spots involving Killing or shedding of blood as bull fighting, cockfighting or hunting)have become hot topic for debate in recent years.as society develops it is increasingly seen as an uncivilized activity and cruel to the helpless animals that are killed.blood sports should be banned.TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE
Some people argue that blood sports should be illegal. I strongly agree with their opinion because it not only hurts innocent
animals
,
but Remove the comma
apply
also
is against basic morality rules
we have in our society
.
Talking about poor animals
, they
get hurt a lot in Correct pronoun usage
apply
these kind
of competitions without deserving it. After centuries of research, we now know that Change the determiner
this kind
these kinds
animals
have emotional processing systems similar to us and moreover
, they feel pain just like we do and it is considered highly cruel and cold-hearted to make them go through such
misery just to entertain us. However
, some people use how we kill and eat them as an excuse. To negate their point, that is
exactly why we have protocols before killing these farm animals
, such
as giving them water and making the process as fast as it gets. For example
, is
Islam we have a procedure called Zebh in which the animal is carefully killed in a sudden fashion, so it would feel less pain.
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in
On the other hand
, our society
is also
taking hits from these type
of Fix the agreement mistake
types
rediculous
activities. Correct your spelling
ridiculous
Firstly
, promoting violence and blood-shed is the exact opposite direction of our civilization. Instead
of teaching our kids about caring and having good will, this
will stay in their unconsious
mind and might Correct your spelling
unconscious
some
day, Correct quantifier usage
apply
shows
itself in Correct subject-verb agreement
show
shape
of crime and hate. Add an article
the shape
Secondly
, even in our most brutal and violent sports
we make sure to respect the Add a comma
,sports
rules
and maintain a level of morality whereas
between
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,between
animals
, there is
no Change the verb form
are
rules
. For instance
, the
mixed martial arts or MMA has been around for a Correct article usage
apply
while
and although
two grown up
humans are put into a cage, they still have Add a hyphen
grown-up
rules
to follow and anyone who watches them fight is also
aware. Hence
, nobody is going to mistake our society
for a jungle where humans drink other people's blood.
To conclude
, I believe it is completely insane and immoral to allow blood sports to continue their activities and we should by
all means, forbid them to stop Add the comma(s)
,by
animals
from being abused and prevent the violence it is injecting to
the veins of our Change preposition
into
society
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