You and some of your friends want to start a weekly dance club, and you have found a hall that would be suitable to hold your meetings. Write a letter of the hall. In your letter: Explain the dance project Ask if it is possible to rent the hall and under what terms State what day and times you would like to use the hall

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Dear Mr. Smith, My name is Shivani and my profession is

dance

teacher at Scared University. I am writing

this

letter to request you regarding the booking of your hall for a

dance

club meeting. Fortunately, I achieved a prize from the

dance

Museum

last

week and

along with

my friends, I want to start a

dance

club for students who cannot afford professional clubs.

Moreover

, the motive of my project would be spreading happiness. Can you please advise me whether

this

hall will be available or not to rent? If you give approval for

this

occasion, please let me know the terms and conditions. Once we receive an approval letter from you, we will start online and in-person registration on 10th October, 2023 from 10AM to 6PM at your hall. Looking forward to hearing a positive response from you. I really appreciate your time and consideration. Please let me know if you need any information or documents. Yours Sincerely, Shivani

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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161 words

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