You have been doing some voluntary work to help your local community. However, now you are unable to continue doing this work. Write a letter to the manager of the organization where you have been working. In your letter: •describe the work you have been doing •explain why you can no longer do this work •recommend another person who is interested in the work

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Dear Mr. peter Greetings ! I ,Ruchika Pawar , an enthusiast,serving as a head of the eco-club which has been an integral part of the ECORISE community in the city of Yorkshire for centuries, am writing

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letter to bring to your notice regarding my services which no longer will be available from next month. Being the head of the eco-club, I

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my hardworking ,diligent team members have planted 5000 trees in the entire region of the city in the past five years . Not only

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dealt with the beautification of the city

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maintaining the cleanliness in and around the area.

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the National Conservation Society as a chief researcher in Australia , I ought to put an end to my services with you .

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, my co-worker, Mr. Bobby who happened to assist me in my every task is a perfect candidate one could ask for . I am sure you would not be disappointed in him. I am looking forward to getting a keen and optimistic reply from your end. Yours Faithfully Ruchika.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 8.0

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Grammatical Range: 8.0

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Task Achievement: 7.0

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