The line graph shows the percentage of people accessing news from 4 sources from 1995 to 2025
This
line graph illustraites
the proportions of people Correct your spelling
illustrates
use
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who use
methods
(TV, Radio, Newspaper
, Fix the agreement mistake
newspapers
Internet
) to access the news from 1995 to 2025.
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and Internet
Overall
, internet
showed to upward Add an article
the internet
trend
while
other
three Correct article usage
the other
methods
showing
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showed
downward
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a downward
trend
over the period
.
In 1995, TV, radio and newspaper had more than 50% of proportion
to access the news. Correct article usage
the proportion
However
, after 1995 all three methods
showed downward
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a downward
trend
and this
dawnward
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downward
trend
will predicted
to remain the same till 2025. TV started from just below 70% in 1995 and Change the verb form
predict
be predicted
then
it went dawn
around 65% in 2000, Correct your spelling
down
then
in 2010 it showed slight
rose and Correct article usage
a slight
then
it went down over the period
.
Newspaper and radio showed the
similar fluctuation during the Correct article usage
apply
period
. Both were started in 1995 around
55% and Change preposition
at around
then
continuously rose down around 30% in 2020. In 2025 also
they
predicted these two Correct pronoun usage
apply
methods
will go down between
30%-20%.
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by
Finally
, internet
is the only source Add an article
the internet
had
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that had
continuous rose
over the Replace the word
continuously risen
period
, which was started from 0% in 1995 and then
showed
rapid Wrong verb form
showing
growing
till 2020 and in 2025, they will accept it will rise Replace the word
growth
until
55%.Change preposition
to
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