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Modern technology and
internet
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the internet
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 made a variety of things possible,
for instance
,
language
 translation apps. The pros and cons
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of
this
 digital are often argued by
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 masses. In
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aspects will be drawn with relative examples.
To begin
 with,
language
 decoder displays made
visitors
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visitors'
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 life easy. To add more, when a person is travelling from one nation to another for vacation or for some business purposes,
due to
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 barrier, they
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 not able to understand
somethings
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some things
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.
For instance
, if a person is ordering food in a restaurant, if he or she is not familiar with the
language
, he or she cannot say anything
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 showing
picture
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 or doing some hand gestures.
On the contrary
,
these kind
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 of displays made humans dependent on them.
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, in ancient times, people used to learn new languages, which
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 their knowledge towards their culture simultaneously. Some study suggests that before more than 70 percent of people were bilingual as compared to present.
To sum up
, every coin has two sides. Invention is always made for beneficial purposes, it's upon us how to use it.
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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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