You work in a busy but poorly organised office and you are keen to be promoted. Your employer needs to find a new supervisor for your department. Write a letter to your employer. In the letter ask to be considered for this job explain why you would be a suitable candidate outline the current problems and the changes you would like to make
Dear Mr. Brian,
I am writing to bring your attention towards the mismanagement of our office in Vaughan, ON.
I am extremely interested in the position of supervisor at my workplace. The reason you should consider me for
this
job is that I have been working here for the past 5 years and am aware of not only all the rules and regulations but also
have good connections with customers and suppliers.
My suitability for this
position can be defined by my skill sets, educational background, knowledge about the company's working culture and experience that I have gained while
working here. Also
, I know all the employees and their strengths as well as
weaknesses so I can assign tasks according to
their capability.
As for the current situation of our office , I am really disappointed with how the projects are never submitted on time, the presentations are just like reading books, employees come late to the office and also
work is not prioritized according to
its urgency. I would like to see a change in the employee and this
can be done by taking their personality tests and giving work accordingly
.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours Faithfully,
Manpreet KaurSubmitted by manubadial on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite