The line graph shows the percentage of people accessing news from 4 sources from 1995 to 2025

The line graph shows the percentage of people accessing news from 4 sources from 1995 to 2025
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The provided line graph illustrates the past and the projection of a proportion of people's preference for 4 kinds of news mediums over a period of 3 decades.
Overall
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, it is evident that
TV
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is the most popular source on the chart.
While
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the internet outlines an upward trend and is expected to surpass
TV
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in the
last
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year ,
TV
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along with
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other remaining mediums is shown a downward trend.
To begin
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with, as can be ,seen
TV
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starts just under 70 % and contributes the highest percentage until 2025, combined with a marginal decline over the chart.
Whereas
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radio and newspapers demonstrate the second popularity, both registered roughly under 60 % in 1995.
Similarly
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, they experienced a gradual decrease, bringing newspapers to be exactly under the radio
at the end
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of the period and both more and less at 25 %. Turning to the internet, in comparison with the others, it starts with zero percentage and struggles to show a marginal climb from 1995 to 2000. Abruptly, recorded a sharp leaping constantly to overtake radio and newspapers in 2015. Sequentially, it is predicted to hit the second overtaken for
TV
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just before the
last
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year to
finally
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record the highest peak in 2025.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words tv with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "marginal" was used 2 times.
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