You celebrated your birthday with some friends last week in a restaurant. It was a great success and you and your friends enjoyed the evening very much. Write a letter to the restaurant to thank them. Mention the food, service and the atmosphere. Also suggest any improvements to make things better. You should write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You do NOT need to write your own address.

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Dear Manager, I and my friends had a birthday party on September 20th at your restaurant and I am writing

this

letter to thank you for hosting and providing us with excellent services The best things that I would like to mention about your restaurant are the staff members and cleanliness that was outstanding. All the workers were amicable and supportive as well.

Also

, we are all complacent with food quality and quantity. The variety and taste of the desserts that you served

at the end

were beyond our expectations and were so tempting.

Besides

these services, the ambience of

this

place is extraordinary, the traditional and primitive art on the walls makes it unique. Even though everything was perfect, one thing was missing that I would like to address here. When I entered the restaurant with my friends, there was no one at the door to welcome us. I would like to suggest you should hire someone to greet customers that will enhance your reputation in the city. Thank you for the wonderful services and delicious meals again. Yours faithfully Sandeep Kaur

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

183 words

8.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

Gratitude
Exceptional
Highlight
Commend
Attentiveness
Professionalism
Inviting
Comfortable
Constructive
Unforgettable
Establishment
Quality
Atmosphere
Polite greeting
Express gratitude
Specific dishes
Enjoyment
Conclude
Intention
Respectful

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