You are due to move into a rented apartment next week but you will not be able to due to an unexpected problem. Write a letter to the property manager. In your letter - Explain the situation - Describe your problems - Tell him/her when you think you can move in

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Dear Manager, I, Sandeep Kaur: a new tenant at your Oakville property, am writing

this

letter to inform you of an expected delay in my moving date. Actually, a tragedy happened yesterday with my loving uncle. He was coming back home after work and suddenly suffered from severe chest pain. He called me; after checking his condition I took him to the hospital emergency department. Unfortunately, doctors informed us that he had a severe heart attack and needed to be hospitalized for a few more days. Because he is living alone, I have to look after him.

Also

, he needs emotional support as well after dealing with

such

a problem. I do not think I will be able to shift

this

coming Saturday because of the chronic illness of my family member. Anyway, he will be discharged on October 5th and I will stay with him for two to three days. I will come to stay in my new rented apartment probably on or after 8th October. Thank you for considering my problem and your patience. Yours sincerely Sandeep Kaur

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

180 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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