The charts below give information about USA marriage and divorce rates between 1970 and 2000, and the marital status of adult Americans in two of the years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The bar graphs
showed
how many Wrong verb form
show
Amercian
Correct your spelling
American
people
got married and divorced from 1970 to 2000.
It is clear that
,
the number of married Remove the comma
apply
people
has gone down since
1970 to 2000. But the couple who got divorced in 2000 maintained comparing with 1970. Change preposition
from
Also
, amount of wives and husbands in 2000 decreased than 1970.
Firstly
, Married people
in 1970 and 1980 were the same 2.5 million
. However
started to fall in 1990 to 2.25 million
, even in 2000 down to 2 million
. Divorce couples slightly increased in 1980 to almost 1.5 million
, but those people
fell to approximately 1 million
during the decade. In 2000, It was slight
decrease too.
Correct article usage
a slight
Secondly
, The rate of people
who experienced to get wedding
was 70 per cent in 1970. Meanwhile, in 2000, They decreased to a little less than 60 per cent. And the proportion of Correct article usage
a wedding
people
that
spouse died and was left alone in 1970 was about ten per cent, it had decreased in 2000. Correct pronoun usage
whose
In contrast
, the raion of divorced in 2000 rose dramatically by around 10 percent
than 2000.
I'm going to Change the spelling
per cent
casino
tonight. If I get a lot of money. I will share it with my family. 😂
But I know never happened to meCorrect article usage
the casino
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