the chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status. write a report.

the chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status.

write a report.
The given graph displays the quantity of
time
that people from different working classes enjoy from 1998 to 1999 by gender.
Overall
,
men
have more leisure
time
than
women
in most of the categories. Meanwhile,
women
have more
time
for themselves in some classes. It is observed that among the people who are employed full-
time
,
men
have more
time
to themselves than
women
.
However
, the difference between their relaxation
time
is not that great as
men
have just over 40
hours
and
women
have just below 40
hours
to enjoy.
Furthermore
, it is a similar case for the unemployed sector as well where the
males
have more
time
than the females only by a margin of a few
hours
. But
this
time
it was around 80
hours
for both
males
and females.
Similarly
, the same situation has struck the people with retired status where they too have
males
having just slightly more
time
to themselves than the females, roughly being around 80
hours
.
On the contrary
, in the part-
time
employment status, we can see that ladies have leisure
time
that is
approximately 40
hours
, which is more than the
males
as
men
generally tend to be working in a full-
time
job if not unemployed or retired. The same goes for the housewives sector where
women
get more
time
to themselves at around 55
hours
. Specifically, the reason for
this
is that a very tiny majority of
men
actually work as the "housewives" of the house.
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