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the chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status. write a report.

the chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status. write a report.
The given graph displays the quantity of
time
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 that people from different working classes enjoy from 1998 to 1999 by gender.
Overall
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,
men
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 have more leisure
time
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 than
women
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 in most of the categories. Meanwhile,
women
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 have more
time
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 for themselves in some classes. It is observed that among the people who are employed full-
time
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,
men
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 have more
time
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 to themselves than
women
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.
However
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, the difference between their relaxation
time
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 is not that great as
men
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 have just over 40
hours
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 and
women
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 have just below 40
hours
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 to enjoy.
Furthermore
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, it is a similar case for the unemployed sector as well where the
males
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 have more
time
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 than the females only by a margin of a few
hours
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. But
this
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time
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 it was around 80
hours
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 for both
males
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 and females.
Similarly
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, the same situation has struck the people with retired status where they too have
males
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 having just slightly more
time
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 to themselves than the females, roughly being around 80
hours
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.
On the contrary
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, in the part-
time
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 employment status, we can see that ladies have leisure
time
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that is
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 approximately 40
hours
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, which is more than the
males
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 as
men
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 generally tend to be working in a full-
time
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 job if not unemployed or retired. The same goes for the housewives sector where
women
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 get more
time
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 to themselves at around 55
hours
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. Specifically, the reason for
this
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 is that a very tiny majority of
men
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 actually work as the "housewives" of the house.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words time, men, women, hours, males with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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