YOU HAVE BOUGHT SOME CLOTHING ONLINE AND ARE NOT SATISFIED WITH YOURPURCHASE. WRITE A LETTER TO THE COMPANY THAT YOU BOUGHT THE CLOTHING FROM . IN YOUR EMAIL 'GIVE DETAILS OF THE PURCHASE 'DESCRIBE THE PROBLEM 'EXPLAN WHY YOU NEED A REPLACEMENT URGENTLY

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Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Sara and my username on your website is sara65.

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week I bought a long green shirt that was ON sale on your online shopping. It has just been delivered to me and I was so happy because next Wednesday is my graduation party, where plenty of my friends and families will be attending. But, I have a number of problems with it.

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, it is about its size and

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is regarding the sleeve's color and pattern. Before buying that, I checked all the sizes, but the dress sent is much smaller than you explained in the details on your site, it's both small and tight. I would like to draw your attention to the size guidelines on your site.

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, I ordered that with a green plaid pattern but

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one is blue and striped. Please find attached a photo of the dress in the email.

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, I should add that all of the accessories that I had prepared to with are green, and with the utmost regret, I am forced to send the dress back. Kind regards, SARA ZARE

zare.19866Wed Sep 27 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

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7 paragraphs

189 words

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YOU HAVE BOUGHT SOME CLOTHING ONLINE AND ARE NOT SATISFIED WITH YOURPURCHASE. WRITE A LETTER TO THE COMPANY THAT YOU BOUGHT THE CLOTHING FROM . IN YOUR EMAIL 'GIVE DETAILS OF THE PURCHASE 'DESCRIBE THE PROBLEM 'EXPLAN WHY YOU NEED A REPLACEMENT URGENTLY

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