Some people think that professional athletes make good role models for young people, while others believe they don’t. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Few individuals believe that professional
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players produce
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role models for early ages,
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some opine they don't.
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views
.I believe in formal
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. To commence with the view from youngers people side they have energy and huge curiosity in
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age. Few individuals believe that professional
sport
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sports
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players produce
best
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the best
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role models for early ages,
however
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,however
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some opine they don't.
This
essay
examine
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examines
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both
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
views
.I believe in formal
views
. To commence with the view from youngers people side they have energy and huge curiosity in
this
age.Few individuals believe that professional
sport
Change the noun form
sports
show examples
players produce
best
Correct article usage
the best
show examples
role models for early ages,
however
Add a comma
,however
show examples
some opine they don't.
This
essay
examine
Change the verb form
examines
show examples
both
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
views
.I believe in formal
views
. To commence with the view from youngers people side they have energy and huge curiosity in
this
age.
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