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Computers are now the basis of the modern world. They should therefore be introduced into classrooms, and their programs used for direct teaching purposes. However, dependence on computers in teaching may carry a certain degree of risk to students. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

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computers
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 classrooms
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 used for direct teaching or that may carry any risk to the
students
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 many malpractices take place via
computer
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,
in
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 my point of view I always
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 in
positive
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 side of a
computer
. On the one hand,
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computers
 are
ruleing
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ruling
 the world nowadays.In
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the classroom
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classroom
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computers
 could help the
programme
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 in two ways.The first benefit is the
students
 learning through the
computer
 can help them to understand easily and quickly
comparing
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 to the
lecturer
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 class.And the
students
 using
computer
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a computer
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 and their programs from their school life can make them easily access the
computer
 programs in future and in
thier
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their
 work.The second advantage is the
students
 can learn
practial
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practical
 classes.The practical class via the
computer
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 them to
develope
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develop
 interaction in the classroom
while
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 to the theory classes.
On the other hand
, the
students
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 safety is
also
very
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 important concept. Usage of
computers
 for
long
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 time may
also
causes
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cause
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 some risk to
the
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childrens
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children
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.
Over dependence
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of
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computers
 when
studing
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studying
 may redirect the
students
 to choose
wrong
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 path, because of wrong
advertisments
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advertisements
advertisement
in
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the internet
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internet
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.It affects the
students
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student's
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studies and mental health in some
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extreme
it
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lead a way to
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suicide
.And the hackers on the other side , the usage of electronic
iteams
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items
 in modern days may lead
path
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 to the hackers to collect our personal and business information easily. In conclusion,
learing
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learning
 through
computer
had
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 some disadvantages but at the same time limited use of
computer
 and
thier
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their
 programs make
students
to
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acheive
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achieve
higher in
thier
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their
 studies.
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