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Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the work place. Others think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake, regardless of whatever the course is useful to an employer. What, in your opinion, should be the main function of a university?

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Nowadays,
it’s
 very important
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it says to have a “piece of paper” because many companies hire only
you
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 have done the
university
, but in only a few cases it is. Some
people
 have different opinions
regard
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university
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such
 as
people
 think that universities should give the knowledge and skills for the workplace
other
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in other
way
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. In
this
 essay, I will explain the main function of a
university
, first I’m a student that are studying mechanical engineering and I know it very well the system.
On the other hand
, I believe that
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 have the possibility to go
in
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the
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university
,
you
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must go
it
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because beyond that you learn things that go outside of knowledge.
For instance
, you learn
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 to clean or like to cook,
this
 could be easy but it doesn’t
above all
 for offsite.
Furthermore
, I think that all
people
 who are
frequenting
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the
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college should study for
ourself
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, to feed
the
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 curiosity without many thoughts.
For instance
, I’m studying mechanical engineering for my passion rather than study for to find a job. In my opinion,
it’s
 important to choose a degree that in the future could open many doors,
above all
 in the world of work but without passion,
it’s
 impossible to finish the patterns. Every year, a lot
people
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 decide to do engineering but only a few reach the end.
This
to
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 say that each of us has a specific thought and
It’s
 difficult to explain how to do something but the best solution is to hear anyone
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 knows more than us. In conclusion, I would maintain that tertiary education should be more content-specific and ensure the fastest and highest quality for its graduates. Not only will professionals be able to use their
university
 knowledge as a catalyst towards their careers, but they will be able to make
living
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 out of it for a lifetime.
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