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The pie charts below show the area and current population of the seven continents as a percentage of the total. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show the area and current population of the seven continents as a percentage of the total. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given histogram illustrates the report of the land and citizens of seven different continents throughout the reporting period. In
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 perspective, the categories taken into consideration are the area and world population. It is clear from the chart that the majority of both land and people are in
Asia
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 at approximately 30% and 61%. Observing the details, it is remarkable that
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 has the most land in the world area which
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 around 30% followed by Africa at 20%
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 North
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 with 16%, South
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 12%
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 Antarctica has 9%
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 7% of Europe and Oceania in the bottom line at 6%. It is noticeable that
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 the most current citizens with 61% from all continents,
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, the rest have only a few population
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 with Africa at 13 and Europe at 12% followed by North
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 at 8%
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 at roughly 5.5 left Oceania to maintained at the lowest levels throughout the reporting time. To summarise, with what has been analysed and compared, it is crucial to highlight that
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 with Asians
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 more present in our modern society.

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Basic structure: Use less body paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words asia, america with synonyms.
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