The charts below show projections for the global production by sector in 2040 and 2060.

The charts below show projections for the global production by sector in 2040 and 2060.
The presented pie charts illustrate the world's six various productions by sector between 2040 and 2060. At first glance, services have dominated the other productions in both 2040 and 2060 with the percentages of 40% and 41% respectively.
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still not any considerable changes in the other five sectors.Manufacturing has a slight increase
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2%.Energy
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a change
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2% but there is a decrease between the years it has dropped from 7% to 5%.The least preferred sector in 2060 is agriculture which has
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percentage of 1%.
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,in 2040 Agriculture does not have the lowest percentages but the materials do 3%.
Overall
, by looking at both charts and comparing them to each other it can be said that there
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dramatic changes between
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.There are only slight rises and declines.
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