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The charts below show projections for the global production by sector in 2040 and 2060.

The charts below show projections for the global production by sector in 2040 and 2060.
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this
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 pie chart shows world, production by sector from 2040 to 2060.
as
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it
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can be seen there is little to no difference between these two charts. all in all, a slight
raise
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rise
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 can be seen in service usage in 2060,
that
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which
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 amounts to 1
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percent
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per cent
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. manufacturing has
also
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been
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increased by 2
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percent
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per cent
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 in 2060. but the same cannot be said for agriculture as it is experiencing a slight dip getting reduced to just 1
percent
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 in 2060. energy production has been reduced to 5
percent
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 as it was 7
percent
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 in 2040.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words percent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
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