The pie chart below shows percentage of ad spending by different kinds of media in India fom 2012 to 2017

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The presented chart demonstrates the

percentage

of ad spending of 6 various

media

types between 2012 and 2017 in one specific country ,which is India. At first glance ,in both 2012 and 2017

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dominated other

media

types with percentages of 43% and 45% respectively .The second most preferred

media

type is print ,which

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not have

significant

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a significant

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rise between 2012 and 2017.There is a considerable increase

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digital

media

which is

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9 where

it rose from 6% to 15%.The outdoor has remained the same with

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the percentage

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of 5% in both 2012 and 2017

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The radio type has a

percentage

of 7% and it is the third highest

media

type in 2012.

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, in 2017 there

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a slight decrease by 3%.

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it is not possible to observe the

percentage

of cinema but it can be said that it has the lowest

percentage

in both 2012 and 2017.

Overall

, there are some slight changes throughout the years but not all of them are considerable as large changes.

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The pie chart below shows percentage of ad spending by different kinds of media in India fom 2012 to 2017

‏Some people think the government should pay for healthcare and education, but other people claim that it is the individual’s responsibility. ‏Discuss both views and give your opinion

Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films. Which factors lead to this and what can be the possible impacts on the local film industry ?

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Some people say that what individuals do to protect cannot make difference, others say that individuals can protect environment. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion