The pie chart below shows percentage of ad spending by different kinds of media in India fom 2012 to 2017

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The presented chart demonstrates the

percentage

of ad spending of 6 various

media

types between 2012 and 2017 in one specific country ,which is India. At first glance ,in both 2012 and 2017

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dominated other

media

types with percentages of 43% and 45% respectively .The second most preferred

media

type is print ,which

does

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did

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not have

significant

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a significant

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rise between 2012 and 2017.There is a considerable increase

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digital

media

which is

9%where

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9 where

it rose from 6% to 15%.The outdoor has remained the same with

percentage

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the percentage

a percentage

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of 5% in both 2012 and 2017

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...

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The radio type has a

percentage

of 7% and it is the third highest

media

type in 2012.

However

, in 2017 there

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was

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a slight decrease by 3%.

Lastly

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it is not possible to observe the

percentage

of cinema but it can be said that it has the lowest

percentage

in both 2012 and 2017.

Overall

, there are some slight changes throughout the years but not all of them are considerable as large changes.

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