the bar chart below shows the top ten countrie for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014

the bar chart below shows the top ten countrie for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014
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The provided bar chart illustrates the amount of electricity production and consumption in the United States, China, Russia, Japan, India, Canada, France, Brazil, Germany and Korea in the given year 2014.
Overall
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, almost all countries had higher electricity production than usage except Germany. China and the United States were producing and using large amounts of energy,
while
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Korea Rep was the least amount of its kind in the given year.
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, 5398
billion
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kWh
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of power was made by China and they used 5322
billion
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kWh
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in the same year.
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the US produced and consumed around 4000
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kWh
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.
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, Russia, Japan and India delivered 1057, 936 and 871
billion
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kWh
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of power respectively, so 1038, 856 and 658
billion
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kWh
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were used by them respectively.
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, Germany consumed 526
billion
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kWh
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,
although
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they made a total energy (of 582
billion
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kWh
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) which was less than consumption.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words billion, kwh with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • electricity production
  • electricity consumption
  • gigawatt hours (GWh)
  • renewable energy sources
  • non-renewable energy sources
  • industrialization
  • economic activities
  • carbon footprint
  • sustainability
  • energy efficiency
  • power generation
  • grid capacity
  • energy policies
  • consumption patterns
  • energy demand
  • production-consumption disparity
  • environmental impact
  • greenhouse gas emissions
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