the bar chart below shows the top ten countrie for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014
The provided bar chart illustrates the amount of electricity production and consumption in the United States, China, Russia, Japan, India, Canada, France, Brazil, Germany and Korea in the given year 2014.
Overall
, almost all countries had higher electricity production than usage except Germany. China and the United States were producing and using large amounts of energy, while
Korea Rep was the least amount of its kind in the given year.
Additionally
, 5398 billion
kWh
of power was made by China and they used 5322 billion
kWh
in the same year. As well as
the US produced and consumed around 4000 billion
kWh
.
However
, Russia, Japan and India delivered 1057, 936 and 871 billion
kWh
of power respectively, so 1038, 856 and 658 billion
kWh
were used by them respectively. Finally
, Germany consumed 526 billion
kWh
, although
they made a total energy (of 582 billion
kWh
) which was less than consumption.Submitted by dusqut on
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