I write a request letter to the manager of the sports center
Dear Sir, I am writing
this
letter to express my interest in joining your sports
club I'm
Leila Anderson, i
am a girl of 18 I'Change the capitalization
I
m
a freshman at the Medical University
in samarkand
which is located in Uzbekistan. Change the capitalization
Samarkand
Unfortunately
there is no Add a comma
Unfortunately,
sports
gym
in
our Change preposition
at
university
,
so Remove the comma
apply
that
I'Correct word choice
apply
m
contacting with
you because your Change preposition
apply
gym
is close to my university
. My former sports
coach advised me to write to you I've been doing athletics since I was young, my school had a gym
, but I haven't been able to do sports
for a week because of the load at my university
that's why I'm
interested in going to your gym
I would be happy if you could tell me more about your gym
. Couldi
you call me if you have time. when is your club usually open ? Correct your spelling
Could
i
study and work so Change the capitalization
I
i
don't have much time during the day. I would like to know about your Change the capitalization
I
gym
's facilities and monthly fees per person Look forward to hearing from you soon Yours faithfully Liela AdamsonSubmitted by usmb91 on
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