I write a request letter to the manager of the sports center

Dear Sir, I am writing
this
letter to express my interest in joining your
sports
club I'
m
Leila Anderson,
i
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am a girl of 18 I'
m
a freshman at the Medical
University
in
samarkand
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Samarkand
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which is located in Uzbekistan.
Unfortunately
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there is no
sports
gym
in
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our
university
,
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so
that
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I'
m
contacting
with
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you because your
gym
is close to my
university
. My former
sports
coach advised me to write to you I've been doing athletics since I was young, my school had a
gym
, but I haven't been able to do
sports
for a week because of the load at my
university
that's why I'
m
interested in going to your
gym
I would be happy if you could tell me more about your
gym
.
Couldi
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Could
you call me if you have time. when is your club usually open ?
i
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study and work so
i
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don't have much time during the day. I would like to know about your
gym
's facilities and monthly fees per person Look forward to hearing from you soon Yours faithfully Liela Adamson
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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