The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. the second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which was result from this energy use

The study illustrates how the

energy

being used in the Australian household, which is divided into two charts. The

first

chart

demonstrates how

energy

is used by his group of people

in

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an

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average, and the second

chart

shows the greenhouse gas

emissions

caused by using the mentioned

energy

types

in the

first

chart

.

Overall

,

according to

household

energy

types

, the heating sources generally

occupies

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occupy

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more than 70% alone. In

case

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the case

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of greenhouse gas

emissions

, it is easy to notice that heating sources

also

generates

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generate

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the greatest percentage

than

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of

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the other sources of

vapor

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vapour

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emission. From the

first

view on the

first

chart

, we will able to observe that different heating forms consisting of heating and water heating

takes

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more

that

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than

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two thirds

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of the

chart

, and the other

energy

types

are sharing in the

last

third together.

In addition

, the other appliances cause the largest amount of

energy

being used in the

last

third than the

last

three

types

of refrigeration, cooling and lighting. For the greenhouse gas

emission

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emissions

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, it seems that water heating and other appliances almost are equal in their

emissions

, and the same is seen between the heating and refrigeration

emissions

.

Finally

, as we observed in the

first

chart

, cooling and lighting

occupies

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occupy

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the lowest rates, where

also

cooling effect is larger than

lighting

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the lighting

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effect. By comparing between two charts, it is easy to notice that the largest effect is

seeing

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seen

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on water heating and other appliances increased in the second

chart

to take the place of heating.