The charts show the percentage of volunteers by organizations in 2008-2014.

The pie chart illustrates the proportion of people who participated in some voluntary organisations from 2008 to 2014. Unit is measured in percentage. As can be seen in the chart, the number of people volunteering in the fields of environment, sport and health care witnessed an increasing trend. The opposite held true for those in art, education and others.

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, environmental volunteers took over the leading position of educational ones over the given years. In the period of 6 years, the figure for environmental organisations rose considerably from 21% (2008) to nearly a third (2014),

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the data for sports increased by 10% starting from 15%. The number of healthcare volunteers accounted for a tiny proportion albeit a 1% increase.

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, data for art and educational volunteers both dropped by 7% to 12% and 17% in 2014 respectively.

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, the figure for the others followed the same pattern with a decrease from 15% to 9%.

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Sep 29, 2023

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